whats good about jan-lokpal and not so good about government’s (lame) lokpal draft

The creating concern janlokpal awareness debate at a busy mall in chhattisgarh
(the creating concern jan lokpal awareness debate at a posh mall in chattisgarh)
Creating concern for a strong lokpal !!Hello readers !!
Ever wondered why team Anna is still in no mood for a cease-fire with he government even though the government is ready to turn the entire concept of lokpal into reality ? Thinking Team Anna is too stubborn?? Think again…..because objects in the media are not as simple as they appear. Here is the entire truth about the need of a strong jan-lokpal and not just a lame lokpal or jokpal as Mr Arvind kejriwal calls it. and here is the dark truth about both he draft’s

Jan-lokpal ( Team Anna’s draft )                                     

Prime minster included !!

Jokpal ( government’s draft )    

Prime minister on a permanent holiday !!

It is often said that what is the need to be so stubborn about the inclusion of prime minister, so my friends here is the importance of including him –

If we don’t include the p.m then all the departments directly under his control will also be left out of it which means that if railway ministry is under the control of the p.m. then the lokpal won’t have the power to investigate for allegations of corruption in the railway ministry and thus a new practise will start under which all departments will be brought under the direct control of the P.M. and thus all departments of the government will be out of the scope of lokpal and then ……more bridges will fall and more swiss banks will flourish !!

Jan-lokpal ( Team Anna’s draft )         

Free to file a complaint  

 Jokpal ( government’s draft )              

 2 years imprisonment if complaint found wrong

you don’t get an imprisonment of 2 years if u commit a theft or burglary but interestingly enough, if you file a complain which is found incorrect then you could be jailed for a period of up to 2 years according to the government’s draft of lokpal. I always knew that the government lacked common sense but now i know that the also lack practicality, morality and integrity..i mean this provision is just ridiculous !!

Jan-lokpal ( Team Anna’s draft )            

Member of parliament included  

Jokpal ( government’s draft )                   

Member of parliament not included

i can understand this, after all how can they allow the industries and corporation flourish, after all that would make india developed and if we become a developed nation then how will the government get aides from the U.N and the world bank for (self)development purposes. So they have a two-fold solution for it – that is, allow the mp’s to extract huge ransom from the big corporations so that they don’t become cash rich and make sure that they are not left with enough cash to give good salaries to their work-force, so that india remains poor and they remain rich

And that’s not all a lot of loopholes still to be disclosed………in the coming edition
join us in our struggle for a strong lokpal , it’s better for u, and the nation
11th december – one day symbolic gathering, and 27th december onwards – Anshan till victory !!
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It’s a creative concern initiative to form a jan-adhar for jan-lokpal !!
creating concern – join the revolution !!

After 8 months of "word-work", we did huge "field-work"…thank you people!!

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   ( The creating concern activites in support of janlokpal )
We are hugely delighted to be back on the blogosphere!!

I am extremely sorry for a delayed post due to the huge involvement of creating concern in “Anna Kranti” and after that a few personal tragedies with me ensured that the post is delayed. So as you guys must be aware that creating concern ran a campaign in New Delhi and Raipur which was highly appreciated by patriots.

We created a revolution!!! 

Creating concern as a youth organization was involved in conducting seminars and workshops in schools and colleges, we ran an awareness program about the contents of Jan-lokpal bill and its importance!!……..we were also involved in street plays at crowd friendly places, press conference , debates, group discussions, candle marches and yeah!! anshan….u name it and we did it!! 10 days of sleepless nights and restless mornings made all the volunteers of creating concern a family in true sense. This movement truly shaped creating concern into a progressive “real world” organization. Lots of media coverage, Live shows, interviews and print coverage highlighted our efforts which was a morale booster for all the youngsters present with us. From street plays for the lower middle class to debates in malls for the uber-kewl class….we covered every individual possible. We were focused towards making it more interactive and thus we organized a confession rally at city mall in raipur, in which people present were asked questions regarding their encounter with corruption to their involvement in corruption and here are a few interesting answers we got –

Mr Ajay said ” I once fell into an open sewage tunnel which was lying open since past 20 days because local municipal body had “lack of personnel” to close it.

Mr Sameer said ” I went to a particular police station to lodge and F.I.R about the theft of phone and what i got was an innocent reply from the officer that “bhai what can we do if you haven’t seen the face of the thief…..next time be careful” .

Creating concern worked with India Against Corruption!! 

These were the kind of answers we got and this is a clear reflection of corruption prevalent in our country but we don’ need to worry because ” the government is serious about corruption and has expressed their condolence ” and i can assure you that the mobile was not stolen by Mr. prime Minister because he is an “innocent man” and he and his ministers are only concerned in stealing spectrum of mobiles and not actual mobiles.

Well Creating Concern has no plans to rest on its laurels and here we are back again for a fresh start and this time with a broader outlook and a reincarnated dialect we are here to stay……we are here to Create a Revolution……..

It’s a creating concern initiative to reincarnate the zeal and patriotism!! 
creating concern – join the revolution!!

Let’s act, let’s react in support of Anna Hazare!!

We all eat enough!!…..it’s time to fast!!
Hello friends
Finally now is the time to create a hope, a change, a revolt. All that we have been dreaming is now
on the verge of happening. Creating concern announces a one day fast (anshan) to support Anna Hazare’s stance and we eagerly look forward to your support. It’s time we made a mark on the psyche of the nation. Folks, that chance you dreamt of is right here. Grab it!
Sometimes respect and regard has to be shown than to be kept. Each day we expect something to change…..sometimes we want to change times, sometimes fortune and sometimes the system. But what do we do for it? Nothing!! When a 70 year old person is fighting for us and is even risking his life then I strongly believe that this is our foremost responsibility to at least stand behind him if not beside him. If we ever wanted a change then this is our chance to register our presence and this is our chance to become a meaningful citizen of the nation. Our country is burdened with 121 crore people let’s do something so that we are no more a burden. Soldiers die for us. Farmers work for us and parents struggle for us….Let’s do something to be proud of…let’s do what is expected from us and what’s inherently present in our conscience….let’s create a revolution!! We were suppressed, we were harassed and we were neglected all these years and that is also because of the fact that we didn’t resist. Money collected from us was used to buy chartered planes….tax paid by us was deposited in Swiss banks and promises made to us were crushed, our hopes were shattered and we were battered. It’s time we give a reply, it’s time we do not cry.
If u think “why should I be with you”…….then It’s not about being with me.it’s about not being with them..because we all were with them for the past 60 years and now we should be with ourselves for a few days and everything will change. I may not be your friend but I certainly don’t have your 4,00,000 crore Rs deposited in swiss banks. I may not be the one who has stood by you in times of emergency..but I am certainly not the one who imposed emergency. So Let’s Unite for the nation because we can always diverge after it!! So forget your differences and remember the similarities because…..
It’s now or never!!…..let’s leave a mark!
Event – I day Anshan to support strong Lokpall bill
event details – 16th august , opposite budha talab, beside indoor stadium , Raipur, 11 a.m. onwards

It’s a creating concern initiative
Creating concern – join the revolution!!